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Post by Kagor Reply on Oct 13, 2010 19:08:38 GMT -5
Looking up at Cynder from her arms Kagor noticed her necklace and tried reaching for it. "Dadadadada" he babbled.
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Post by jackson117 on Oct 14, 2010 2:15:05 GMT -5
Jack seemed to have found the room which cynder studied and Kagor was in, He had lost Spyro so the other Objective was to protect this hatching..He positioned himself on a little table and fell asleep...He was appearing more solid..the slime was turning more solid like..Bone structures and early organs could be made out to start to form..His see through appearance was starting to get more darker...soon he wouldn't be see through..However he still looked like a Ball of lard and slime..With tentacles at the bottom and few around the base learning out..A tall neck peering from the tip of the top which connected to a head that had a dragon like Skull..The teeth and jaws were there..But the eye's were nothing but a patch from yellow.
The same change was happening to Ruby..Only difference was..She was Blue..He was dark blue.
(Someone should least follow up on it and study it)
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Post by stardustluna on Oct 14, 2010 6:06:30 GMT -5
Cynder saw the slime come into the room. She rolled her eyes as she put Kagor into a playpen. "And what are you still doing here?" she asked it, not expecting an answer. "Thank you for helping me in the fight, but I don't have time for you."
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Post by jackson117 on Oct 14, 2010 16:22:04 GMT -5
By now it was acting funny..."Protecting..As I was Designed for..With a purpose" This thing was speaking now?...It seemed to be advancing in growth and IQ.
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Post by Kagor Reply on Oct 14, 2010 16:24:12 GMT -5
Kagor's yellow eyes stared at the creature from within the playpen. He began to reach towards it. "Pay!" he smiled.
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Post by stardustluna on Oct 14, 2010 18:51:41 GMT -5
Cynder sighed. "I don't need protecting. I am strong enough to get myself out of situations. Sure, it might be difficult and slow compared to having help. But I. Don't. Need. It." she said the last part as she started to beat the mess of mushy pulp and book covers into a pile. "I know that I'm sounding harsh, and I don't mean to. But with everything happening recently, I've been busy. And having some....thing that I don't know or can be sure that I trust follow me around everywhere won't help me with my work." She took some old jars and started to fill them with the mush. "However, so far you have not proven a threat to me or my friends. So I welcome you to stay in my suite if you feel that you must 'protect' me. However, I will be keeping a very close eye on you. Now I must ask you to leave." as this last part was said, her sight was sharp and penetrating; but with a touch of softness around the edges. Cynder wanted to help this creature, but it was related to the evil thing that attacked her home, her friends. She knew nothing about it. And that sense of unease, the fact that she didn't exactly know what to do in this situation; she didn't like them at all.
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Post by Kagor Reply on Oct 14, 2010 19:03:57 GMT -5
Kagor put his tiny claws through the bars of the playpen and began to fuss slightly still trying his best to reach towards the creature. "Pay! Pay!" He really didnt enjoy being stuck in the playpen when he'd rather wanted to be outside of it playing.
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Post by jackson117 on Oct 15, 2010 3:11:16 GMT -5
"It attacked for one reason...Protecting"..This was us..When we lived..
Flashback*
A Wyvern looked down as it's family and everything it loved..Was dead..It mourned..Full of rage..those dragons didn't deserve this..It raised it's into it's head*
"What i have shown you was us..We came"
Another Flashback
*All 7 Paths of Jack were there..They were the emotions Jack felt when he died..They would pass on the legacy and Fuel the themselves of creating a new world..so that it never happens again,
"Negative Why do we have to Hurt people?" Negative snarled..."We don't hurt them..We Injure them..And then Capture them so when they wake up..The new world shall be there.." Positive looked up and Roared "That so un-fair?" Negative Warped himself around him and ensnared him into his mouth...Rage walked in "You ate Positive did you?..Interesting..So i take it his stuck..Don't worry i heard all about it..He would only get in the way" *
Positive sighed "I was stuck in there for a long time, When news speard to us that we sensed a Bloodline of the family Jack was in..We couldn't help but Cry in joy..At least it got better for the Moral of it, However during those years, we lost track of him..Instead were slowy captured other dragons and put them to sleep, so that when they wake up, we be already Killed their world and make a new one..In our image"
He looked at cynder now..Eyes focusing,
"I was in Negative for the whole time till He got hit by the one you called Blaze, The point is..We have Dragons..Nearly million of them..We been at this for years..even decades as Malefor's army Attacked Jack's family at the time he first came into Darkness....We finally sensed a purple egg had the bloodline, However Malefor's army made it hard to track it down, Then it vanished..Years passed up till now when we sensed it again..Both of them..Negative went to confirm...
The Point is..Someone With a good Heart died a long time ago, And the only Family ties it had were dead, the only ties that remain are Spyro, his father and all those before them leading to the ancestors of which Jack lived with...They spawned hate..And this is what came out..They won't stop...They will never stop...They will be back in strong force"
He looked worried
"Take me to everyone in charge of this whole damn Place!...I know what the attack plan for my Fallen brother's is..Before it's too late!"
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Post by stardustluna on Oct 15, 2010 9:35:03 GMT -5
Cynder picked Kagor up from the playpen. everything is just so urgent, isn't it? she thought to herself. She spun her head at the creature. "Come." was her only command. "But if I find out that you have been lying, and that your ultimate goal is to hurt Spyro instead of 'protect' him. Then you better hope that you die before I find you." She said this last part while slightly bearing her teeth. She started to walk down the steps from her tower.
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Post by Lancer232 on Oct 15, 2010 9:49:13 GMT -5
As a warning Jackson, don't let your idea with Negative Jack go in motion until a few days have gone by in the RP. Rule #5 in the Roleplay Rules thread.))
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Post by Blaze the Dragon on Oct 15, 2010 10:18:37 GMT -5
I'm also seeing some very striking similarities between the Seven Paths of Jack and the Six Paths of Pain from Naruto. Nagato, controlling the Six Paths of Pain, was the Seventh Pain, essentially making it the Seven Paths of Pain. What's more is that the Seven Paths of Jack are based on emotions and planes of existence; the Six Paths of Pain are based on the Six Realms of Buddhism. I don't know if you are aware of this Jackson, but what you're doing could be considered copyright infringement in a sense.
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Post by Kagor on Oct 15, 2010 14:00:26 GMT -5
While in Cynder's arms, Kagor looked up at her.."M...M!" he said trying to formulate his first real word.
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Post by jackson117 on Oct 15, 2010 18:54:18 GMT -5
((Based on 7 paths of Pein?..Wow I never read the Invasion of Pein story arc, When i created these guys it was because I needed to Find a Group of Anti-hero's that are related to a Protagonist, How do you deal with that...For example..Having a loving father go on a rampage of starting a war..How would anyone deal with that? If this is a giant similarity then I have to say, I Never based these guys on them, The idea of 7 of them comes from my user name, which hoses a favourite page in the bible....Not to mention these Paths think for themselves..they only work together for one main goal.
In short there would be many of these guys but I thought to limit it to 7 for Story-wise, Otherwise I would use every Emotion and base it on one of them, one for each,
In Short, No i did not Rip off or Base these guys of Naruto...Granted there are Similarities but that's like comparing Resident evil to Silent Hill, Also i was planning to let this story arc of Negative slide for a week))
He stared at Cynder with icy cold eye's, "You dare State we Wish to Kill what we were designed to Protect...!" His anger got even more intense, as more tentacles started to flail around "That is...Unacceptable...UNACCEPTABLE!" He fell down the table like water running down anything, and bolted for the door, "I'm going for a Long Walk" Maybe that time with Negative did affect him.
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Post by Lancer232 on Oct 15, 2010 20:09:18 GMT -5
Alright, carry on. Send me or Blaze a PM when you plan to get something in motion so we can prepare appropriately.))
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Post by Kagor on Oct 17, 2010 19:05:00 GMT -5
"M..M..MM!" Kagor said again.
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